written on 8/14/14.Title:
caffeinated desires | Story:
a girl addicted to a boy | Inspiration:
Revamping and editing old poems | Type:
Free Verse - Romance.
i've always liked this piece, but i think i like it a little better now that i edited it. feel free to answer the questions below! i would really appreciate it, including any other suggestions or typos, etc. Questions:
1. Did you understand the story of the poem before reading the comments? If not, what did you think it was about?
2. Do all of the images make sense or are they confusing?
3. Did you feel an emotion from the piece or was it kind of blah?
4. What would you like to see me write about next?
Thanks for reading, darlings! <3
is really appreciated!
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